Cherished Moments

BrthrMrk, Blzrd
729 Feb 22, 19 Hip Hop
0:00 / 4:00
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Hip Hop unique
         
Mar 4, 19

Nice stuff, agree with @headtruamaromance though

Mar 4, 19

It's structured Well, so it evens out, not bad

Mar 1, 19

this is nice man

Mar 1, 19

It's not bad! Listening to the same piano sample for 4 mins is pretty rough though. Im not sure if you recorded the piano yourself, but next time, you should definitely get more melodies than just one. Variation is a big part of music.

Mar 1, 19

keep at it! cool to see you synthesising sounds

Mar 1, 19

Nice!

Mar 1, 19

It's okay. Not that bad tbh, but the piano melody (is that a sample?) doesn't really fit the beat you made. I'd suggest either turning down the beat a small bit, or changing up the piano a bit. Overall, not bad.

Mar 1, 19

This is pretty chill, kinda nostalgic

Mar 1, 19

"stop deleting my comments. Critique is important to artists. If you refuse to listen to peoples' opinions you wont grow as an artist. Negative comments are the life blood of a developing artist. They tell us that maybe we have the wrong idea. If were wrong, we can learn from our mistakes."

Mar 1, 19

:)

Mar 1, 19

- joe

Mar 1, 19

the chord's you added with space don't really match the piano

Mar 1, 19

i said that in my first comment too.

Mar 1, 19

you deleted his comment again, good job.

Mar 1, 19

lol I didnt like the tone of the way he said it but its wisdom

Mar 1, 19

i like the chillness

Feb 28, 19

Vill chibes

Feb 28, 19

clap is too loud bt i still love it and yea i second what DreamWeaver said and that choir pad is nice but it needs to be more like a ladies voice more than a male because the bass is conflicting with the spacey feeling it has

Feb 28, 19

i'd make that kick a bit louder though and make the sidechain stronger

Feb 28, 19

at first i didn't like it that much but the sounds you did with space kind of make the track tbh not bad refreshing to hear decent trap/hip-hop stuff