Nice, the only stuff I would really say has been said by others already lol. You seem like you're doing pretty good though.
Nov 21, 21
its a start for sure. Gas lead sample, the drums could use some fixing on parts. Try learning to tune your 808s or using a synth to make 808s and u should have a cleaner result. All in all good track, hopefully this was constructive enough and not to harsh :)
Nov 21, 21
Yeah I don't really know how to tune 808s properly I just mess around with the pitches until it sounds right lol
Nov 21, 21
fuck yeah bro good job could use some fixin up but i think its fye
Nov 21, 21
yo dis good man but like if u kinda changed it up a lil it would be spot on although dis go hard keep it up man
Nov 21, 21
ay but dis is still fire man like i said keep it up cuz i could never sum like dis so dont let bad feedback get in yo way man (gud shit)
Nov 21, 21
Yeah a lot of people are saying it's too repetitive/bland, thanks for the feedback
Nov 21, 21
it feels like theres a lot missing w this beat, it just feels so weird to me. its not terrible tho
Nov 21, 21
Damn you really hit me with the "it's not terrible" lol. I feel you though whenever I add a lot of leads or other melodies even if i cut out that low end, it bleeds through the 808s so everything sounds muddy and weird. Thanks for the feedback though
Nov 21, 21
damn its good
Nov 21, 21
The melody ain't even bad but the drums and composition disappointing af to me. Try adding some more to the percussion and try mixing the drums a little more creatively, just m y opinion no hard feelings
Nov 21, 21
Yeah I noticed in some parts the 808s are out of tune, but yeah in terms of the type of 808, usually on these types of beats you don't have to go too hard on the drums. Maybe I'll make another version where I switch up the 808s halfway or something
Nov 21, 21
np. Idk if it was intentional but the 808s out of tune in certain parts that's another thing i noticed. The type of 808 you used just seemed a little basic for this beat imo
Nov 21, 21
I actually think the drums are pretty creative, but in terms of adding more percussion, I could see what you mean so thanks for the feedback.
fire. no downsides.
there is literally 0 cohesion
Nice, the only stuff I would really say has been said by others already lol. You seem like you're doing pretty good though.
its a start for sure. Gas lead sample, the drums could use some fixing on parts. Try learning to tune your 808s or using a synth to make 808s and u should have a cleaner result. All in all good track, hopefully this was constructive enough and not to harsh :)
fuck yeah bro good job could use some fixin up but i think its fye
yo dis good man but like if u kinda changed it up a lil it would be spot on although dis go hard keep it up man
it feels like theres a lot missing w this beat, it just feels so weird to me. its not terrible tho
damn its good
The melody ain't even bad but the drums and composition disappointing af to me. Try adding some more to the percussion and try mixing the drums a little more creatively, just m y opinion no hard feelings
*fixed drum pattern