It makes me so happy to say that ALMOST ALL OF THESE PRESETS AND SOME OF THESE SAMPLES ARE ACTUALLY MY OWN!!! I watched a 14-minute video on sound design and started experimenting, and I think I did great for what pretty much is my first time! I tried to go slightly for more of an ILLENIUM style track this time while still maintaining my style, and SURPRISE! Random voice reveal! I don't know what came over me to make this decision but I did... and no regrets (yet)! I'm aware these vocals aren't the greatest quality vocals in the world (and I don't have the greatest quality voice in the world), I have yet to figure out how to use any professional stuff. So for now, this is what I'm working with. Eventually, I'd like to re-record these vocals with better quality, but at the moment I'm just sucking it up. I couldn't get the live record feature on AT to work for me so I had to import these as samples... oof. SCREW HIGH NOTES, THOSE WERE SO FRICKING DIFFICULT TO PULL OFF MAN- anyway... I wish I could expand this song, but I don't have any ideas for what the next lyrics could be. Plus, I already expressed the theme that I wanted to tell with this song. Feel free to give me advice on how to make proper vocals, how to improve my voice, set up a mic, ANYTHING- that would be appreciated immensely.

LYRICS:

Lost in a winter storm

The frost began to bite

Cold became my heart

And dark became my sight

Then you came into view

A vibrant ray of light

Your warmth melted the cold

You brought me back to life

You rescued me

When it was hard to save myself

You saw in me what I couldn't see

And my demons you repelled

You changed my world

Made me want to change for you

And I wonder if you have someone who'd do the same for you

Who will lead you home

When you're all alone

Who'll fight your demons

Fight your demons

I'll be there for you

When you don't know what to do

I'll be your guardian

Guardian

I'll help you to pull through

[PS thanks SYNRGY for improving my track!]

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  • I might remix again lool

    • *I knew I saw you on soundtrap once or twice... XD*

    • Yup, that's me!... (and I'm actually a girl but technically I don't care what you refer to me as lmao)

      I actually did NOT use autotune, I recorded these shitty vocals on Soundtrap and found that personally, I felt that my voice sounded worse with autotune- so I left that out

  • is it ok if i (or we, if you're interested) do a VIP of this and submit to proximity? I showed this to them and they said it has potential to be featured

    • Hahaha that's okay man, I'm on the same page. I've been getting my share of homework and have a ton of makeup work now (I just came back from a family trip), and on top of that I need to get going on college/scholarship applications :/ I've been feeling very overwhelmed as well... I haven't been on AT much either, I'm trying to get back on here more.

      Thanks though, I appreciate it. Hope you've been well, hang in there :)

    • Oh PHACK

      im sorry i just got overwhelmed with sch homework at this point that i kinda took hiatus from AT

      But now i got more time so, hell yea let me revamp the remix

    • Hey, Icebox... I haven't forgotten about this. I really, really wanted this, and I STILL do, I was incredibly excited for it- I just can't really do shit on the draft because every time I load it up, it's way too big and laggy for me to be able to contribute anything :(

      I was wondering what you wanted to do about this. Did you end up forgetting about it lol

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    • I looked at that artist's cover art and I see what you mean. I can check them out at some point soon

    • Also follow him he is underated

  • This is ur real voice or is less two semitones or more???

    • XD

    • @WOLFEYE I just heard Adele's voice again on the bus ride home and dude, I have NO IDEA where your head was at when you said I sounded like her but I SOUND NOTHING LIKE HER BRUH XDDDD

    • Thanks Wolfeye!

      And Cero, I didn't find it rude at all tbh, made me even prouder that I have such a deep voice. I thought it would've taken only 2 notes, but 3? Awesome! :D

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  • Dang ER this is awesome!

    • Thank you so much dude!!!

      I'm hoping I can sing more often in my stuff, I'll just need people to process vocals for me. As a matter of fact, me and @Crxyn (Cerixyn) are working on a track together that I'll be singing in as well- stay tuned!

  • forgot i was remixing this, Ey got something to do now

    • I failed the first time, i'm making a new one which is edm

    • Yes, PLEASE work on it I'm really impatient about seeing the finished product lmao

  • Not gonna lie, when I made this, I wasn't just taking inspiration from ILLENIUM, I was also taking a bit of inspiration from you @Icebox with some of the singing techniques and a hint of the instrumental.

    I just realized that though as I was listening to the track again, I heard some elements in here that reminded me of a couple of your past tracks. Somehow it was like some subconscious inspiration... does anyone else get that or is that just a me thing?

    • xD I get that too JHAHAHAHA

      reminds me a lot of when i first started out!

  • yay #6!!!!! :DDDD

  • Hey bud we haven’t talked in a while but I love this and gotta say it’s good I want to collab but my computer broke sooooooooo yeah gg

    • Thank you mate! And OOOOOOOOOF, hopefully you can get access to a better computer eventually

  • nice! i definitely hear some of that illenium influence. you have a good voice, keep at it :)

    one little crit, i feel that the piano is a bit too loud. maybe have it more in the background (probably with some reverb) so that it's not overbearing and competing for attention with the vocals.

    • Thank you! :D

      I had someone else say something about editing the piano as well, I'll see what I can do when I get the chance

  • 2:22 YES THIS SOUNDS SO GOOD Ncs Level yes

  • the more i remix, the more i like this Fight your demons i love that